I have been like sand
Letting everything wash over me
Pass through me
Washing me away grain by grain
Now I picture myself as the rich black earth
The sun gives me heat
The rain nourishes me
And good things will grow.
numer darowizny: SRTF/067/SWD .
1 month ago
20 comments:
"Washing me away grain by grain"
That is a beautiful line, and I relate to it more than you could know. I'm so far losing the battle. Maybe I should re-make myself as a concrete monolith?
I picture myself as the red clay
Not very nurturing to plants
But artist love me
But only after I've been fired.
Lame, but in a hurry, sorry. And I know I haven't commented in a while, so I needed to make sure I showed you a little blogger love today.
Your poetry is much smoother than mine... and more repeatable at family gatherings.
I dated a girl,
her name was Babs.
We humped like rabbits,
she gave me crabs.
My mom hated this poem when I wrote it on her birthday card.
Wank away, dear
I can absolutely relate.
And now I feel the urge to hug you.
((((HUG)))
Who really owns the sod?
I think it's just on loam
if we silt through the facts.
Thank you very mulch.
There once was a man from Nantucket...
Oh well, you probably know that one anyway.
Mo - Thank you so much... I actually wrote this a while ago and I'm back to feeling a bit sandy.
Scope - Hahaha, lovely.
Cowguy - *wipes a tear* That was beautiful.
BeckEye - Well, now that I have permission...
Cora - Thanks mate! *gratefully accepts hug*
Eric - Hahahahahahaha, nothing like a good pun or twelve to put a smile on my face!
SkyDad - I'm familiar with the dirty limerick genre, thanks!
; )
I'm glad to see you making something good out of what's washing you away :)
WWW - Thank you sir, that's very kind of you.
I like this one a lot. It's very elemental and spare. Just right.
Vic - Thank you! It's funny how my poems are so tiny when my posts are usually long and rambling.
whyyyyyyy.........do u feel like a wanker?
CA - Dunno, I guess it just feels a bit pretentious to write poems like I'm this deep person when really I'm about as shallow as it gets.
: )
I'm going to agree with you, you are an official wanker. But not in a mean way
Ooh... I love this. A transformation so many of us need to make.
Sharon - Uh, thanks?
One Sassy Girl - True. It can be so hard to maintain the self. Maybe as I get older I will figure it out more easily.
nah--as you get older you just wash away faster!
Eva - Welcome! Also, dang it!
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